Friday, November 6, 2009

[chapter 6]

[Kairi and Shin were about to enter the apartment when Kairi noticed a car park in front]

Kairi: hmm.. does aunt-yukie has guest today? I wonder whose car this is… [Kairi and shin enters the apartment]

Kairi: We’re home!...

Yukie: is that you kairi?[talking from the kitchen]

Kairi: [approaching the kitchen] ahmm…aunt-yuki?whose car is parked in front of the ap— [kairi got surprised in what she saw, or should I say “who” she saw that she dropped her bag]

[Shin got curious of Kairi’s reaction so he rushed-off to the kitchen]

Shin: what’s wrong?huh? who’s that?

Guy: hi Kairi!..long time no see..^^

Kairi:[smiles] DYLAN!! [Kairi rush-off to the guy and hugged him] ahm..how are you? You look taller! What brings you here? Did you just arrive? Why didn’t you tell me you were coming? You have a car?? I’ve missed you!

[*Dylan Akizuki – is almost a childhood friend of Kairi, they knew each other before Kairi’s father died, he is the son of Yukie Akizuki – Kairi’s Aunt – though again, they are not blood related]

Dylan: Whoa! Slow down Kairi, I can’t answer all those questions…

Kairi: hihi,..sorry Dylan, it’s just that it has been too long since we’ve seen each other…

[Dylan and Kairi laughing at each other]

[Shin looks slightly irritated looking at the two]

Shin: Ahem! [fake cough]

Dylan: hmm...? Kairi?

Kairi: yes?

Dylan: Who’s he? Your boyfriend?

[Shin and Kairi got shocked of Dylan’s question and they both blushed immediately]

Shin: SHE?? My girlfriend??? ABSOLUTELY NOT!!

Kairi: HE?? My boyfriend??? ABSOLUTELY NOT!!

[then they both look at opposite direction still blushing]

Shin: I wouldn’t want to be stuck with that clumsy girl y’know!!

Kairi: CLUMSY??!!hmph! and I wouldn’t want to be with a perverted guy like YOU!!!

Shin: Whaat??! I told you it’s not mine! [he’s talking ‘bout the XXX in chapter 5]

Kairi: You can’t deny it!! I’ve caught you already pervert!

[Dylan and his mom are just smiling while watching the two quarrel]

Dylan: Mom, does they always show their love to each other this way?hehe..

Yukie: ^^.

[after kairi and shin heard that, they became stiffed then…]

Kairi & Shin: hmph!..

Kairi: hmm…sorry Dylan, you shouldn’t have seen me like that..it’s embarrassing…

Dylan: that’s ok Kairi, no need to apologize, hmm…. Aya’s taking so long…

Kairi: Aya-chan? She’s here? Where is she?

Aya: I’m here!..hi Kairi-Oneechan

Dylan: Where have you been?

Aya: just for a walk oniichan

Yukie: I better finish preparing our dinner…

Kairi: I’ll help you out Aunt-yukie

Yukie: Thanks Kairi, but its ok, you haven’t seen Dylan for a long time, why don’t you guys go to the living room and talk..

Kairi:well,..ok Aunt-yukie, if you say so…

[then they all went to the living room, except shin- he went back to his room]

[Meanwhile, in shin’s room]

Shin: [talking to himself] sheez..she looks stupid!tsk, why should she be so excited talking to that guy??arrgghh..she irritates me so much!![*Aawwweee…is he jealous?? ]

[in the living room]

Kairi: ‘Aa-aa-aaaaachooo’ ‘sniff sniff’

Dylan: you’ okay kairi?

Kairi: yup,..(hmm..maybe someone’s thinking of me..hihi..) sorry ‘bout that..

Aya: ..So, as I was saying,..Oniichan is really lucky with this kind of stuffs, last time he won his super awesome cellphone on a raffle in the supermarket, And now,..he won his car with just one ticket!!

Kairi: (hih..Aya is so energetic) wow,.maybe you have some kind of lucky charm Dylan…

Dylan: Well, I’m not sure of that, but it’s a good thing and it’s easier for us to go to places especially visiting mom, and you…Kairi…

Aya: it’s not a GOOD thing!!! It’s an EXCELLENT thing!!!

[Kairi just smiles and Dylan looks at her gently]

[next day]

Kairi: good morning Aunt-yukie, g’morning Aya and Dylan!

Yukie: Goodmorning to you too Kairi, Dylan went out early, he said he had a little work to do..

Kairi: Eeh??!!i thought he’s here for a vacation?

Yukie: well, you know him…he likes to get busy even at times like this, but he said it’s just temporary…

Kairi: Aahh…I see,..Dylan is really amazing…, well, I have to go Aunt-yukie, Ja!

Yukie: ok Kairi, take care!!

[At the school]

Dylan: uhm,..excuse me ladies… do you know where I could find the faculty room?

S.girl1: Ahh..y-yess[blushing] just go to the second floor and then right..

Dylan: Thanks!you’re a big help

S.girl1: ..he called us ladies..

S.girl2: I wonder who that guy is…

S.girl1: yeah,..he seems mature to be a student…

S.girl3: ..and is young to be a teacher…

S.girl1,2,3: ‘Sigh’….

[At the Classroom]

Sensei: Guys, your teacher in English Mr. L, is on leave so you’ll have a substitute teacher for the time being, you can come in now Mr. Akizuki.

Kairi: A-ki-zuki?...

[Door opens – Dylan enters]

Dylan: ohayo minna-san. I’m Dylan Akizuki, I’ll be your substitute teacher in English, nice to meet you!

All girls in class: Nice to meet you too sensei~~~

Kairi: [shocked and just looking at Dylan]

Dylan: ^^P [looking at Kairi]

Shin: tsk.

[Lunch break]

Kairi: hey Dylan, why didn’t you tell me you’re going to be a substitute teacher here?

Dylan: Well,.. I want to surprise you, and I think I did a great job doing that..^^

Kairi: yeah..very good job…

[Some girls peaking to where Dylan and Kairi is Talking]

g1: Eehh…Kairi know Akizuki-sensei?

G2: waahh…why is she always close to cute and cool guys??..i’m so jea~lo~us..

G3: well,..it’s unforgivable.. but.. it can’t be help if its Sakura..

G1 and 2: ‘sigh’ yeah…

Suzuka: ei, Meiko, is that the Dylan we know?

Meiko: well, I think so, ‘coz he’s talking to Kairi after all…

G1,2,3: eehh?? Suzuka? Meiko?

Suzu&Meiko: huh?

G1: you two know Akizuki-sensei too?

Suzu: yup!^^.

G2: waah…now I’m really, rea~lly~ JEA~LOU~~~S…

Meiko: *jea..lou..s…huh..?* [looking at Dylan and Kairi]

Suzu: huh?did you say something Meiko?

Meiko: hm?eh..no..nothing…

[end of chapter 6]

Thursday, October 23, 2008

[chap 5] Unexpected Visitor

Chapter 5

[At the school]
[Classroom]

Kairi: ohayo gozaimas’!
Meiko: ohayo..
Suzuka: ohayo kairi!..
[Shin enters the classroom and goes to his seat]
Suzuka: ohayo Natsume!
[Kairi looks at Shin]
Shin: ..uh..*yo!* [Shin accidentally looks back at Kairi]
[then they both remembered the incident yesterday, then they blushed and immediately looks back at the other direction]
Suzuka: eh??...
Meiko: hmm…
[school bell rings – class starts]

[Lunch time]
Suzuka: that’s odd…
Meiko: what is?
Suzuka: Seiya didn’t go look for Kairi today just when Kairi’s not wearing her glasses….
Kairi: maybe he had already given up on me…
Suzuka: hmm… maybe… but still…
[Seiya is just looking at Kairi from afar with a serious face]

[class hours…]
[Shin is sleeping again; Kairi is taking down notes]
[Seiya [*on different classroom] is lost in his thought still thinking about the incident[*and about Kairi??...^^P]

[Class Ends]
[Kairi, walking home, passing the pedestrian lane, saw Seiya waiting on the other side of the road]
Kairi: Sei…ya…
Seiya: Can i??... talk to you?

[Kairi and Seiya are sitting in a bench at the park]
Kairi: is there something wrong? Are you ok? Sei—
Seiya: Kairi… I think – I’m – in love --- with you…
Kairi: huh? But isn’t it?
Seiya: I’m not really the person as you see me everyday, actually I only act like that because I want to know what you are to Shin…* and I think I’ve found out…*
Kairi: Shin? Does he have something to do with this??.. i…
Seiya: but I guess I fell on my on trap…
Kairi: I .. I don’t know what to say…
Seiya: that’s ok. You don’t have to. I just want you to listen, and that’s enough..[smiling]
Kairi: *Seiya*
Seiya: and..uhm..Kairi?
Kairi: yes?
Seiya: can I ask a favor?
Kairi: ahm..sure, what is it?
Seiya: can I have dinner with you tonight?
Kairi: sure!
Seiya: really? Thank you Kairi!... I really love the taste of your cooking!
Kairi: hmm.. it looks like it would be a clear sky tonight… is it ok if we eat at the apartment’s rooftop?
Seiya: Sure, anywhere is fine with me…^^

[At the apartment’s rooftop, there’s a table for two that is nicely set]
[Seiya is waiting for Kairi]
Kairi: I’m here!
Seiya: well then,.. let’s eat!
[Kairi and Seiya talk different things about each other while they were eating]
[After a while, Kairi walks near the edge of the rooftop gazing at the sky full of stars]
Kairi: the sky is really beautiful especially when it’s full of stars…
[Seiya is just looking at Kairi’s face]
Kairi: don’t you think so too Seiya? [smiling]
Seiya: ..huh.. ah.. yeah..[smiles back]

[Next morning]
[Kairi saw a letter inserted below her door, then she picked it up and read it]
[the letter says:…]

“Kairi,
Thank you for the dinner last night. Just as I expected, it was very delicious!! I just want to tell you that I’ve decided to go back home for a while.
Tell shin, ‘I won’t lose to him.’…

P.S.
Who’s the weird girl with glasses?? Is she your friend??..oh..well

HOPE TO SEE YOU AGAIN!!

Seiya”


[*Seiya really doesn’t recognize Kairi when she’s wearing her glasses]
Kairi: *..haha*..goodbye, Seiya…
[then Kairi goes out her room, coincidentally Shin just goes out his room too.. then they walk to school together]
[while walking]
Kairi: so,.. is Seiya really going back home?
Shin: yeah
Kairi: why? It’s so sudden?
Shin: I’m not sure, but he said there are things he should settle.
Kairi: ahh,..i see..

[school - Kairi's Classroom]
Meiko: so, Seiya goes back home this morning?
Kairi: yup, he left a note under my door.
Suzuka: hmm...it'll be lonely not seing him around, especially when he's shouting "my princess!my princess" everywhere,heehee
Meiko: haha.. right!
Kairi: [had a flash back of when Seiya confessed to Kairi [*chapter 4]]
[Kairi is currently los tin his thoughts and didn't hear what Suzuka and Meiko was saying]
Suzuka: Kairi.. Kairi.. hey Kairi! are you listening??
Kairi: [back to reality...] huh? oh, sorry guys, something just passed my mind, hehe..

[After Class]
[Rain starts to fall]
Suzuka: awwe.. it's raining!..
Kairi: hmm, you're right..
Suzuka: 'sigh' i forgot to bring my umbrella
Meiko: then, let's share my umbrella, anyways we have same paths to our houses
Suzuka: really??thanks Meiko!^^
Meiko: how about you Kairi?
Kairi: hmm, I'm ok. i brought my umbrella, also I have to finish some papers
Meiko: it must be tough to be a class rep
Suzuka: but for sure Kairi really fit being a class rep coz' she's always top on our class
Kairi: I'm not that good you know...
Meiko: well then, we'll be going now, bye Kairi
Kairi: bye. [then she went to the library to finish her work]
[Shin is still in school because he lost the book he's reading[*it's not an academic book...-_-] ,he is looking everywhere then he remembered that he left it in the library]
Shin:oh crap! i hope no one sees it, argh i'm so stupid..[talking to himself]
Kairi: huh? [found a small book that is left on the table where she is seating, and when she openned it..]eew, it's full of XXX, for sure a guy owns this..he even disguise it with a different cover
[when Shin arrives the library, he saw that Kairi is holding his book]
Shin: (oh crap!)
Kairi: Shin?.. don't tell me...
Shin: huh?!.. No!that's not mine..why would i read that kind of things...
Kairi: i'm not saying anything yet, and how did you know that this book has such things??! it has a different cover..
Shin: ..ah..well..that's..
Kairi: uugh..you pervert! [then throws the book at Shin]

***other scene***
[A car stops by a park, a guy is driving it]
[Apartment’s telephone ringing…][SFX: ring]
Aunt: Hello? Akizuki’s Apartment, how may I help you?
Guy: ahm,.. Hello… [*I didn’t revealed the guy’s name in this chapter]
Aunt: oh it’s you! How are you?
Guy: I’m fine. I just called to tell you that I’ll visit the apartment today, I’ll be staying for a week or two]
Aunt: really? That’s great! I should tell Kairi..
Guy: ahm.. pls. don’t tell Kairi yet, I want to surprise her…[the guy then disconnects the call [he’s using a cellphone]]

[chap 4] Fell On His Own Trap

Chapter 4

[next day]
[Kairi is preparing to go to school]

[School – classroom]
[Seiya running fast in the corridors to Kairi’s Classroom]
Seiya: my princess!!...
[When Seiya have reached the classroom]
Seiya: where’s my princess??...[looking at every direction]
Kairi: [sweat-drop effect][standing in front of Seiya]
Seiya: hey you!..have you seen my princess??[talking to Kairi, he doesn’t recognize her because she’s wearing her eyeglasses]
Kairi: *is this guy stupid or what??*
Meiko: I think he’s stupid…
Kairi: ..eh?meiko…
Meiko: Ohayo..
Kairi: Ohayo..
Suzuka: ohayo gozaimas’ Kairi, Meiko!... eh?why is Seiya here?
Meiko: he’s looking for Kairi…
Suzu: huh?but Kairi’s just here…
Kairi: ‘sigh’ [removes her glasses]
Seiya: oh? You’re just there my princess… where have you been???
[Kairi puts on her glasses again]
Seiya: hey! Why are you there? Where’s my princess???
[school bell rings]
Seiya: awwee,..i didn’t even see my princess [ walks out the classroom with a gloomy face]
Kairi: [sweat-drop effect](well at least I already know how to keep him away from me…)
Shin: tsk!..baka… [then takes his seat]
Kairi: ho-e??.. [looks back then takes her seat]

[during class hours]
Sensei: Mr. Natsume!..
Shin: [sleeping…] Zz..
Sensei: MR. NATSUME!
Kairi: *psst!...Natsume, the teacher’s calling you!..*
Shin: uh…huh?...what?..
Sensei: Mr. Natsume! It seems that your not paying attention to our lesson, will you please answer the equation on the board…[math problem…]
Shin: ‘yaaawn’ [stands, then goes to the board, answered the question fast, then goes back to his seat and sleeps again]
[The whole class and the teacher became stiff with matching jaw-drop effect looking at Shin][*except Kairi]

[end of class]
[Kairi, Meiko and Suzuka walking out the School]
Seiya: hey wait you three!..
[the three looks back and saw Seiya]
Meiko: what do you want?
Seiya: have you seen my princess?
Kairi: Sei—
Seiya: shut up! I’m not talking to you! ..[talking to Kairi] ..hey you two, why are you with this weird girl?!! Where’s my princess??
Kairi: eh??...weird?!!! [removes her glasses]
Seiya: oh my princes! I’ve found you! ♥_♥
[Kairi puts on her glasses again]
Seiya: eh?.. where’s my princess again??...
Meiko: [pointing at other direction]
[then Seiya runs to where Meiko points and ask everyone he runs into]
Seiya: did you see my princess? You, did you saw her?..[fading]
Meiko, Suzuka & Kairi: ‘SIGH’

[at the apartment]
Kairi: I’m here!
Aunt: oh, Kairi is that you? [shouting from the kitchen]
Kairi: Yes auntie!...
Aunt: ahm, will you run to the grocery store? There’s something I forgot to buy a while ago,.. and I just can’t leave because I’m cooking…
Kairi: Sure auntie.. wait I’ll just put down my things…[including her glasses]
Auntie: ok, thanks Kairi!..

[At the grocery store][*most scenes do not have dialogues so this part may seem full of narrations]
[Kairi looking for what she needs to buy then pays at the counter. While she was paying, Seiya was passing by the grocery store and he saw Kairi from the outside [*the walls are made of glass panels]. Seiya just follow Kairi’s movements with his eyes. When Kairi goes out the grocery store, Seiya followed her secretly. While Kairi was crossing the pedestrian lane, the goods that she had bought fell out of the plastic bag and when she is about to pick it up she didn’t notice that the “do not walk” sign is on and a truck[*the driver’s drunk] is coming her way. Shin, passing on the other side [*imagine that the grocery store is at the corner of the road] saw Kairi and also saw the truck that was coming, so he runs fast towards Kairi and push her at the side of the road, they both fell and is in awkward position [*Shin was on top of Kairi, **don’t make a greener idea, got it?]]

Shin: you ok?
Kairi: ah,..yeah..
[then they suddenly realize that they’re in awkward position, they immediately stood up, blushing! And then Kairi saw the goods she bought was hit by the truck]
Kairi: oh no..
Shin: tsk! Forget about that! [then Shin pulls Kairi, holding her hand, then goes back to the grocery store]
[then, the two went back to the apartment together; Shin is holding the goods, and Kairi is carrying Shin’s bag]
Kairi:[looks at Shin then smiles]

***
[As for Seiya, when he is about to save Kairi, he already saw Shin coming for her, after that He became spaced out and just walked out and sat at a bench at the park thinking deeply [*I’m not sure what he’s thinking though]
***

[at the apartment]
[When Shin and Kairi was about to enter their rooms]
Shin: aw!
Kairi: what’s the matter? Is something wrong?Shin: No. it’s nothing.
[Kairi saw that Shin is having a hard time to move his left knee]
Kairi: let me see it.
Shin: I said it’s nothing!
Kairi: I SAID, LET ME SEE IT!!
[Shin just kept silent and Kairi looks at Shin’s left knee]
[Kairi got shocked because she saw that Shin’s knee was bleeding]
[*flash back of the incident]
Kairi: oh my God! Is this from the accident??[*duh..]
Shin: it’s nothing. It’s just a scratch…
Kairi: BA-KA! How could you say that it’s just a scratch if it’s bleeding!!... wait for me I’ll just get the first aid kit.
Shin: wait Kai- [he didn’t finish talking because Kairi is no already there]
[At Shin’s room; Shin is sitting at the sofa; Kairi is sitting at a small chair fixing Shin’s injury][*Shins left foot is on Kairi’s lap]
Shin: you don’t need to do that, it’s not that bad…[slightly blushing]
Kairi: No, I insist, it’s my fault, it’s my responsibility!
Shin: you’re right…
Kairi: [nods her head]
Shin: it is your fault.
Kairi: right!...
Shin: because you’re clumsy.
Kairi: Absolutely correct!!—eh?!!
[then Kairi removes Shin’s injured foot on her lap]
Shin: AW!... I’m injured y’know!
Kairi: what did you say??!!hmph! I’ll go back to my room! [slightly blushing][After Kairi goes out, Shin just smiles; Kairi is also smiling outside Shin’s room]

[end of chapter 4]